i love it.
i love it.
Thank you so much :)
Could have been longer but nice cartoon and voice acting tho.
Edit : no worries, i'll be looking forward to the next one.
oh there's a big meaty one coming soon, don't worry
Aight, pretty short, animation is meh okay , i like the lipsynch and voice quality though, and the joke is somewhat "eh" but okay. It's alright, could be better.
Thank you! I took a break from youtube n newgrounds and made a few short cartoons. 'nother one comin tomorrow!
Okay.
Animation is alright, pretty choppy, random comedy i don't quite follow.
So yeah, it's okay, i guess.
appreciate the honesty
Animation is choppy but not bad.
Voice acting is okay.
So yeah, it's nice.
Keep it up.
Thanks for the critique!
Honestly, it's not bad, pretty short, but not bad.
Keep up.
Did what I could in the time that I had. Thanks
uhmmmm yeah, too short, too poorly animated and "loud = funny" humor is not that funny.
good effort on animating this thing though.
eh.
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Go to the back yard and spin in circles
Your too short, too poorly animated and "loud = funny" humor is not that funny.
good effort on animating this thing though.
eh.
At least the animation is funny and the mic quality is so bad but it's kinda funny.
not bad.
It's always one of the hardest things to swallow when you are used to submitting studio quality audio for projects and the director wants it to be scuffed. I had so much fun recording for this project.
Not bad, the animation is pretty jittery and smooth and a bit almost too much jittery, i dunno why everything is shaky but ok.
I recon the joke is that your character doesn't care, this guy just eat it what's on the ground and that's it and then queue the logo.
Artstyle is cute, not much to say.
Not much to say about the colors and background.
So yeah, overall it's alright, could be better even if needs some audio in it.
So yeah, keep it up.
thanks, the jitteriness was intended, but i rushed my frames, so it went over board, ill be careful the next time i do this. Thanks for the critique :D
It's not bad.
The voice acting is alright, pretty clean voices and all.
I'll be looking forward to watch the fully animated one of this parody.
Thank you! Like many of my ideas, this was a thing that I recorded and needed to attach to something, so I ended up making this little animatic. I don't know that I'll take it further, but it's a starting point. Thanks for your review!
I can draw, animate and voice act.
I draw in any kind of art styles including my own, animate with flash and other softwares, and voice act some cartoon characters and people i can imitate.
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